https://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&feed=atom&action=historyFebruary 3, 2022 - Revision history2024-03-28T19:20:12ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.39.0https://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&diff=17008&oldid=prevGrlucas: Fixed typo.2022-02-03T20:44:41Z<p>Fixed typo.</p>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Research is integral to your success in this course, and most of you are still not doing it. Remember, the highest grade you will earn on responses is a '''7 out of 10''' if you do not do research. As I have said many times: secondary texts should be from '''books''' or '''scholarly journals''' that you find on Galileo—''not'' web sites.{{refn|This is not to say there aren’t good resources to be had on web sites, and you may use them. However, research on college must go beyond an easy Google search and into the university library. This is required for this course. I’m not sure how to make myself clearer on this point.}} When you use a source, it must be cited correctly. I recommend using the approach I outline in [[Digital Citation]]. Use the author’s name; use the name of his or her article; use parenthetical citations for page numbers. These details are important, and I explain that a little more in Digital Citation. Please have a <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">loo </del>at it.</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Research is integral to your success in this course, and most of you are still not doing it. Remember, the highest grade you will earn on responses is a '''7 out of 10''' if you do not do research. As I have said many times: secondary texts should be from '''books''' or '''scholarly journals''' that you find on Galileo—''not'' web sites.{{refn|This is not to say there aren’t good resources to be had on web sites, and you may use them. However, research on college must go beyond an easy Google search and into the university library. This is required for this course. I’m not sure how to make myself clearer on this point.}} When you use a source, it must be cited correctly. I recommend using the approach I outline in [[Digital Citation]]. Use the author’s name; use the name of his or her article; use parenthetical citations for page numbers. These details are important, and I explain that a little more in Digital Citation. Please have a <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">look </ins>at it.</div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Also, look at [[Link Logic]]. Composing links correctly is a part of literacy today, and you should be doing it correctly. This document outlines the basics.</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Also, look at [[Link Logic]]. Composing links correctly is a part of literacy today, and you should be doing it correctly. This document outlines the basics.</div></td></tr>
</table>Grlucashttps://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&diff=17001&oldid=prevGrlucas: Fixed typo.2022-02-03T15:30:52Z<p>Fixed typo.</p>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Before you post, '''read what has been posted already'''. You are not writing essays here; in fact, super long posts and big blocks of text will actually cost you points in evaluation. Posts should be focused and precise, as I have already covered before (see [[January 4, 2022|Reddit Discussions: A How-To for Literature Classes]] for a reminder).</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Before you post, '''read what has been posted already'''. You are not writing essays here; in fact, super long posts and big blocks of text will actually cost you points in evaluation. Posts should be focused and precise, as I have already covered before (see [[January 4, 2022|Reddit Discussions: A How-To for Literature Classes]] for a reminder).</div></td></tr>
</table>Grlucashttps://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&diff=17000&oldid=prevGrlucas: Tweaks.2022-02-03T15:29:31Z<p>Tweaks.</p>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Please reply to questions in the correct place; hit the reply icon under the question or post you are replying to. Many posts are not in the correct place. Soon I will begin just deleting these. I’m sure you do not want that to happen.</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Please reply to questions in the correct place; hit the reply icon under the question or post you are replying to. Many posts are not in the correct place. Soon I will begin just deleting these. I’m sure you do not want that to happen.</div></td></tr>
<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div> </div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">{{quote box|width=25%|title=Pro Tip'''|Never write: {{bulleted list|“I believe . . .”|“I think . . .”|“I feel . . .”|“In my opinion . . .”}} Can someone tell me why in the comments (linked below right)?}}</ins></div></td></tr>
<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Correct grammar and mechanics must be used. For example, many are not using possessives correctly. Often responses are wordy and <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">repetitive</del>; these should be revised before <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">posting</del>. Remember: this is a writing course, so you should be concentrating on making your writing as good as it can be.</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">'''</ins>Correct grammar<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">''' </ins>and <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">'''</ins>mechanics<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">''' </ins>must be used <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">in all of your writing</ins>. For example, many are not using <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">[[Editor’s Checklist|</ins>possessives<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">]] </ins>correctly. Often responses are wordy and <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">repetitive—especially from late posters</ins>; these should be revised before <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">submitting</ins>. Remember: this is a writing course, so you should be concentrating on making your writing as good as it can be.</div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Generally, if you posted ''at least'' twice, you earned a 7/10 minimum. If you only posted once, you likely earned a 6/10—as twice per thread is the minimum. I fully expect grades to get better as your writing and research skills are honed. If your grades are lower than you expected, please don’t despair. Try to incorporate my feedback into your next posts. [https://www.reddit.com/r/LitWiki/comments/rbzcy3/rlitwiki_lounge/ Ask questions] if you have them! I still have a bunch of Reddit awards to give out. Again, who will be the first?</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Generally, if you posted ''at least'' twice, you earned a 7/10 minimum. If you only posted once, you likely earned a 6/10—as twice per thread is the minimum. I fully expect grades to get better as your writing and research skills are honed. If your grades are lower than you expected, please don’t despair. Try to incorporate my feedback into your next posts. [https://www.reddit.com/r/LitWiki/comments/rbzcy3/rlitwiki_lounge/ Ask questions] if you have them! I still have a bunch of Reddit awards to give out. Again, who will be the first?</div></td></tr>
</table>Grlucashttps://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&diff=16999&oldid=prevGrlucas: Tweaked.2022-02-03T15:26:46Z<p>Tweaked.</p>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Generally, if you posted ''at least'' twice, you earned a 7/10 minimum. If you only posted once, you likely earned a 6/10—as twice per thread is the minimum. I fully expect grades to get better as your writing and research skills are honed. If your grades are lower than you expected, please don’t despair. Try to incorporate my feedback into your next posts. [https://www.reddit.com/r/LitWiki/comments/rbzcy3/rlitwiki_lounge/ Ask questions] if you have them!</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Generally, if you posted ''at least'' twice, you earned a 7/10 minimum. If you only posted once, you likely earned a 6/10—as twice per thread is the minimum. I fully expect grades to get better as your writing and research skills are honed. If your grades are lower than you expected, please don’t despair. Try to incorporate my feedback into your next posts. [https://www.reddit.com/r/LitWiki/comments/rbzcy3/rlitwiki_lounge/ Ask questions] if you have them! <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">I still have a bunch of Reddit awards to give out. Again, who will be the first?</ins></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Finally, please '''[https://www.reddit.com/r/GRLucas/comments/sjljrg/second_unit_feedback_engl_1102_s22/ reply to this post]''' to let me know you have seen it, read it, and understand it. Ask questions. I will give you extra points for engaging here. Click the reply icon below and leave a comment for some extra credit.</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Finally, please '''[https://www.reddit.com/r/GRLucas/comments/sjljrg/second_unit_feedback_engl_1102_s22/ reply to this post]''' to let me know you have seen it, read it, and understand it. Ask questions. I will give you extra points for engaging here. Click the reply icon below and leave a comment for some extra credit.</div></td></tr>
</table>Grlucashttps://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&diff=16998&oldid=prevGrlucas: Updated.2022-02-03T15:25:53Z<p>Updated.</p>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Finally, please reply to this post to let me know you have seen it, read it, and understand it. Ask questions. I will give you extra points for engaging here. Click the reply icon below<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">, right </del>and <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">lave </del>a comment for some extra credit.</div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Finally, please <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">'''[https://www.reddit.com/r/GRLucas/comments/sjljrg/second_unit_feedback_engl_1102_s22/ </ins>reply to this post<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">]''' </ins>to let me know you have seen it, read it, and understand it. Ask questions. I will give you extra points for engaging here. Click the reply icon below and <ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">leave </ins>a comment for some extra credit.</div></td></tr>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This may sound like a lot, but I do see improvements. Keep it up. We have one more unit before our first Report (research essay) is due. How are you feeling? Tell me on the linked thread. I’d love a little back-and-forth with you guys.</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This may sound like a lot, but I do see improvements. Keep it up. We have one more unit before our first Report (research essay) is due. How are you feeling? Tell me on the linked thread. I’d love a little back-and-forth with you guys.</div></td></tr>
</table>Grlucashttps://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&diff=16997&oldid=prevGrlucas: Added more about grades.2022-02-03T15:24:39Z<p>Added more about grades.</p>
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<tr><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Finally, please reply to this post to let me know you have seen it, read it, and understand it. Ask questions. I will give you extra points for engaging here. Click the reply icon below, right and lave a comment for some extra credit.</div></td><td class="diff-marker"></td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Finally, please reply to this post to let me know you have seen it, read it, and understand it. Ask questions. I will give you extra points for engaging here. Click the reply icon below, right and lave a comment for some extra credit.</div></td></tr>
</table>Grlucashttps://grlucas.net/index.php?title=February_3,_2022&diff=16996&oldid=prevGrlucas: Added C19 info. Tweaks.2022-02-03T15:15:53Z<p>Added C19 info. Tweaks.</p>
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Research is integral to your success in this course, and most of you are still not doing it. Remember, the highest grade you will earn on responses is a '''7 out of 10''' if you do not do research. As I have said many times: secondary texts should be from '''books''' or '''scholarly journals''' that you find on Galileo—''not'' web sites.{{refn|This is not to say there aren’t good resources to be had on web sites, and you may use them. However, research on college must go beyond an easy Google search and into the university library. This is required for this course. I’m not sure how to make myself clearer on this point.}} When you use a source, it must be cited correctly. I recommend using the approach I outline in [[Digital Citation]]. Use the author’s name; use the name of his or her article; use parenthetical citations for page numbers. These details are important, and I explain that a little more in Digital Citation. Please have a loo at it.<br />
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Also, look at [[Link Logic]]. Composing link correctly is a part of literacy today, and you should be doing it correctly. This document outlines the basics.<br />
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Before you post, '''read what has been posted already'''. You are not writing essays here; in fact, super long posts and big blocks of text will actually cost you points in evaluation. Posts should be focused and precise, as I have already covered before (see [[January 4, 2022|Reddit Discussions: A How-To for Literature Classes]] for a reminder).<br />
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You should also be using the '''up-vote and down-votes'''; I’m not sure anyone did for these two responses. This is important to make sure strong posts float to the top and weaker ones sink to the bottom. I expect more participation in this regard moving forward, please.<br />
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Please reply to questions in the correct place; hit the reply icon under the question or post you are replying to. Many posts are not in the correct place. Soon I will begin just deleting these. I’m sure you do not want that to happen.<br />
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Correct grammar and mechanics must be used. For example, many are not using possessives correctly. Often responses are wordy and repetitive; these should be revised before posting. Remember: this is a writing course, so you should be concentrating on making your writing as good as it can be.<br />
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Can someone tell me why in the comments (linked below right)?<br />
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